Thursday, 6 August 2015

Teri Palkein..Meri Palkon say Kuch Mili Iss Tarah……

Many has Heard..Seen..Read Stories on Love Marriages..But This is very rare We have ever Read something about Arranged Marriages..
This is Not the Story of Two Persons..But The Story of Families Love..Ups and Downs…How the Lives gets connected of Two Persons..from Two Different Families  so beautifully..and For FOREVER…..





Aditya Kumar- Age:24 A Simple..JoyFul..Family Person…A Technical Consultant Staying Abroad with His Mother Avantika Kumar and Brother Rubal Kumar

Avantika Kumar- A Very Straight Forward ..Modern Personality Strict But at the Same Time Fully Lovable Person..Married To Harish Kumar But Due To Financial Problems Long Years Back and For Their Sons Bright Future Staying away From Husband...owns a Beauty Salon.

Harish Kumar- Full Of LiFe.. Owns Boutiques ..staying in Mumbai..His Wife is His Center of Life..Often Travel to London to Meet and Spent some Quality Time with His Family..

Rubal Kumar- The Chotey Nawaab Of the Family..Mischevious..Lazy..Loves Football and in College..but Never interested in Books..

Anuj Kumar- Harish Kumar’s Elder Brother

Sheela Kumar-Anuj’s Wife

Kayra- Sheela and Anuj’s Daughter ..(elder than Aditya) Married to Varun Sharma

Pankhuri Gupta- Age: 20 A Simple..Family Person..recently completed the College Life..Staying in a Joint Family..An Engineer..Loves her Family a lot..Enjoying a Vacation After a Long Hard Work..and After that all set To Join Father Raj Gupta’s Business..

Prakash Gupta- Pankhuri’s Granfather

Meena Gupta- Pankhuri’s Grandmother

Raj Gupta- Pankhuri’s Father

Archana Gupta- Pankhuri’s Mother

Neha Gupta and Priya Gupta- Pankhuri’s Sisters

Aryan Gupta- Pankhuri’s brother

Rishi Gupta- Pankhuri’s Uncle (Raj’s Brother)

Shaleeni Gupta- Pankhuri’s Aunty (Rishi’s Wife)

Samarth..Rohan..Karan Gupta- Pankhuri’s Cousins (Rishi and Shaleeni’s Sons)

Nandini Sharma- Pankhuri’s Bua (Raj’s Sister) Married to Kamal Sharma (Varun’s Elder Brother)

Aman Sharma- Pankhuri’s  Cousin (Nandini and Kamal’s Son)



Other CHARACTERS…DURING THE STORY…

Scene 1:- Aditya’s House in London

A Lady is busy making tea in Kitchen..and her Husband is sitting in a long Round Type Balcony ..reading the newspaper..

A Lady is none other than Avantika Kumar..


Avantika comes from the Kitchen with Two Cups of Tea..

Avantika: Ye lo..Harish..ab rakh bhi Newspaper..Tum ya India se itni dur kya Paper padhney aaye hoh..

Harish: Ek..Minute Avantika..bas hoh gaya..

Avantika very slowly says:Mujhay toh laga tum mere saath time spent karnay aaye hoh..

And sits Facing the other side..from Harish..

Harish after few minutes realized what he has done..(to Himself):Beta Harish..Ab kya Karogey..

Harish : Arrey..Avantika..Ye Chai thandi hoh gayi hai..

Avantika(angrily):So..What…I will not do it again..

Harish:Accha..mujhay koi problem nahi hai thandi chai peeney mein..mein toh bas tumsay baat start karney kay liye kaha..

Avantika:No..I am not at all interested in talking to you..jao tum apna newspaper padho..

Harish:I am Sorry … mein thoda paagal huh tum jaanti hoh naa..tabhi toh itni khoobsurat biwi ko chodkar newspaper mein ghusa huwa tha..

Avantika:Tum Thoday nahi pooray Paagal hoh..and gets up from the chair and goes near the edge of the balcony seeing the Sunset..

Harish(To himself):Kuch Karna Padega..Madam ko kuch zyaada hi naaraz kar diya hai..

Harish goes and bring his mobile and Plays and starts to the sing with it:

Mm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm, Aah Ha Ha Ha Ha
Hey Hey Hey, Hey Hey, Aah Ha Ha Ha Ha

Tumko, Sirf Tumko Humne Chaaha, Chaahat Ki Kasam
Tum Bin Agar Jeena Padaa Humko, Mar Jaayenge Hum
Dil Hai Tumhaara, Dhadkan Tumhaari
Tere Liye Hai Saansein Hamaari, Ho
Itna Hai Kehna, Sang Rehna Sanam
Hey Hey Hey, Aah Ha Ha Ha Ha
Eh Hey Hey Hey Hey, Aah Ha Ha Ha Ha
 Goes Near Avantika and hold her hand and says: I am Sorry Baba..Avantika smiles and hugs him..

While Hugging they both stands watching the sunset and talks:

Avantika: Tumhe pata hai mujhay kaisa manaana hai

Harish: Ahha..Bilkul..Akhir Biwi toh tum meri hi hoh..Padosi ki thodi hoh..

Avantika: Shut up Harish..Tum aur tumhara sense of humour dono buddhay hoh chukay hai..

Harish:Aiiee..Mein Buddha nahi huh..Haan yeh sahi hai ki ab mera Beta Jawaan hoh Gaya hai..aur uskay liye hum Ladki Dhund rahe hai..Lekin aaj bhi mera upar hazaaro ladkiyan marti hai..

Avantika: Bas bhi karo Harish..Mere alaawa tumhe koi jhel nahi sakta..

Harish: Haaan..Yeh Sahi hai…

Avantika: Mein KA Karu Ram Mujhey Buddha mil gaya.. and runs from there while pushing Harish..

Harish: Avanitka..Ruko Tum..Mein abhi Bataata huh..Yeh Buddha kya kar sakta hai..

And They Both Runs in the House..


Both were running around in the living room..

Harish got tired and sits down on the Sofa:

Harish:huh..Bas ab nahi hoga..

Avantika: I told you..you have become an old man..

Harish suddenly got faint while sitting on the sofa.

Avantika goes near him : Harish..Hariah..Kya hua tumhey?

Harish suddenly catches her hand and pulls her towards him and wrap his arms around her: Ab Batau kya..Kitna Buddha hoh gaya huh mein…

Avantika: Harish..Tum Naatak Kar rahey thay?

Harish: Ofcourse Darling..

Avantika:Tum kabhi nahi sudhrogey..

Harish: Ahha..Sudharna bhi kaun chahta hai..ab itni achi biwi mili hai toh thoda tapori pana toh banta hai.. and winks her..

And…..The Bell Rang…

Avantika: Leave me Harish..Koi aaya hai..Let me go and Open the Door..

Harish: Koi nahi mujhey pata hai kaun hoga..Humaaray Ladle Jawaan Aditya aaye hongey Office say..I am Telling you Avantika Iski Shaadi Jaldi karwao..humesha yeh mere romance ki band bajaatey hai janaab inki correct timings say.. London mein rehney kay bawajud bhi ek girlfriend tak nahi hai iski..

Avantika:Aiiee..Mere Betey ko kuch mat kaho..bohot accha baccha hai mera..

Harish:Aur bohot seedha bhi… abhi dekhna ussay toh pata bhi nahi hoga usnay abhi kya kharab kiya hai!

Avanitka smiles: Chalo..ab chodo..woh bell bajaa raha hai..

Harish: Hmmm..Lo..Jao..

Avantika goes and opens the door.. and There he is..

A Man in Black Suit with the Black bag on his right Hand..Green Eyes Looking Tired 
But at the same time Looking absolutely adorable and Handsome.. enters the house

Aditya : Mom.. and Hugs Avantika… and Avantika hugs back..

Avantika: Aww..my Son..Looking very Tired..

Aditya: Yes Mom..aur bohot Bhuk bhi lagi..jaldi say khaana dedo..

Harish comes there and says: Ahha..aaj tumhey Khaana nahi milega Bacchay..

Aditya: dad..and hugs him..

Aditya: Kyun Dad? What happen?

Harish(like Singing few words): Abhi abhi mere Dil Mein Khayaall…Aaya hai..Ki Aaj hum dono Bahaar Jaayenge For Dinner..lekin (By Seeing Avantika) only Boys..Out..

Avantika:Ahha..Tum aur boy? Laughs..

Harish: Avantika phir se…

Avantika: Ok..Ok..First Go and Change..Adi..Then You Both Go..

Aditya: Okay Mom..I”ll go and Change Dad..Tab Tak aap decide kijiye kis restaurant mein jaana hai..

As soon as Aditya went Avantika asked Harish: Yeh achaanak say tumhaara bahar jaaney ka plan kaisay bana liya..

Harish: Woh Humay India bhi toh jaana hai na..aur kis maksad say jaana hai ..uski bhi toh baat karni padegi na..Adi say..

Avantika: Hmm..Kaafi samajhdar hoh gaye hoh tum..

Harish: Aap hi ki Sangat ka asar hai Madamji..

Avantika Smiles and Says: Now You too get ready Mr.Kumar..

Harish: Okay…Lekin joh kaam mera adhura reh gaya hai who toh poora karlu.. and tries coming closer to Avantika..

And Suddenly A Voice Came: Momm..Please mere Kapdey nikal dijiye..

Harish: Ab toh is baar India jaatey hi iski shaadi karwakar hi rahunga..

Avantika: laughs..Now Go…


Scene 2:- Pankhuri’s House in Mumbai..

A Big Mansion.. with a Big Family Staying in it…

A house is full of laughter..love..Craziness…

Prakash Gupta is back from the Office trip and after a long month Family is enjoying Lunch Together…

Shaleeni: Chalo Bacchon..The Lunch is ready..

Archana:Sab Aa gaye..Yeh Ladi kaha reh gayi..

Shaleeni: Aajayegi Didi..aaj uska last day college mein..

Archaana: Haan jaanti huh..lekin uskay bina ghar suna suna lagta hai..

Shaleeni: Haan yeh toh baat aapki bilkul sahi hai..

Prakash: Woh toh is ghar ki jaan hai..

Rishi: Abhimaan hai..

Raj: Komal si..Masoom si..Pankhuri…

Samarth: Meri Favourite Didi hai..

And all the Kids together : meri bhi..meri bhi..

Meena: Pata nahi kya hoga..jab shaadi karke jaayegi..

Prakash: hmm..Yeh Shaadi ki Baat kaha say aa gayi..

Nandini: Bauji..woh mujhsay..Woh Aap bahar gaye huye thay..isiliye.. itnay waqt say nahi kaha.. Woh meri devrani ko Pankhuri bohot pasand hai toh..woh apnay cousin joh..london mein rehta hai uskay liyye..

Prakash: Nahi.. aagey mujhay nahi sunnna ..Pankhuri Humsay dur nahi jaayegi..

Raj: Aur Nandini abhi meri beti bohot choti hai..

Nandini: Lekin Bhaiya..woh aapkay liye choti hogi..

Raj: Lekin..

Prakash: Raj… Nandini sahi keh rahi hai..Pankhudi badi toh hoh gayi hai lekin yeh rishta muhay manzoor nahi hai… London bohot dur hota hai..aur mein apni bacchi ko apni aankhon say itni dur kabhi nahi honay dunga..

Rishi: Yeh Baat sahi kahi Bauji aapnay..hum yahi dhund lengey ek accha sa ladka humaari Pankhudi kay liye..

Nandini smiles: Jaisa aap sabko theek lagey..Lekin yeh Pankhudi hai kaha?

And Suddenly a Voice Came : Mein YAHA hu…

All the Eyes went to the Door.. Where a Beautiful girl was standing with the books in Hand ..wearing a Salwaar Kameez and a Neck Dupatta ..and a Frameless specs on her Eyes..

Pankhuri: Dadaji… and went to the Dining Hall..Hugs her Dadaji.. Kaisay hoh aap? Kaisi rahi aapi trip?

Dadaji: Merey Bacchay..teri wajese meri trip successful rahi..tune joh quotation format bheja tha..woh accept hogaya..aur humay contract mil gaya…

Pankhuri: Kya Dadaji aap bhi..mene toh sirf sab ready kiya tha..waha present toh aapnay kiya na..

Archana: Chalo..Chalo..baatein baad mein..pehle jaakar fresh hokar Lunch ke liye aa jao..kabsay sab tumhara wait kar rahey hai..

Pankhuri: Oops.. Sorry..main abhi fresh hokar aati huh Mummy…

And Pankhuri wents to her room..

Dadiji: Pata nahi iskay bina kya hoga humaara..


…………
Hmmm… Lo..Yaha toh rishta shuru honay say pehle hi sabki Naa Hoh Gayi..
Ab Kaisay Judengey yeh Do Dil joh Rehtey hai Milo Dur…?
Kaisay hogi inki Pehli Mulaakat?


Kya Hoga Kuch Khaas Joh Milaa dega..yeh Do Ajnabiyon ko..?

…Jaanay kay liye..Wait for the NEXT PART….

Thank YOU…
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Thursday, 7 August 2014

Kahin..Unkahin..Baatein Part-7

Hola Guys... This one is dedicated to one of the Manasian..I will not tell the name but she will know it..she was very eagerly waiting for this one..Apologies for making you wait for so long and do tell the spelling mistakes as I have written this on Phone.
Here It starts::---


In the Early Morning the house is filled with the beauty of togetherness..
The Family is making all the arrangements of the wedding to be held in the Evening..
Anuj: Adi..Decorations ho gayi..
Adi: Yes..Mama all done..
Rubal: Food Counters are in my section and it will all ready at the time.
Adi:But Mama..where is Dad?
Anuj:Mujhe kya pata..guest room mein hoga na Harish..
Sameer: Nahi Anuj Bhaiya mein abhi waha se hi aa raha hu..He is not there..
Rubal: Ok..let me see around.
After few minutes..Rubal came back.
Rubal:I just have seen in all the rooms..lekin Harish uncle is not found.
Pankhudi and other ladies comes from the other side of the hall and says: Even Mom is missing.
Adi:Kya?...
And then all got it..these both are together and they starts laughing.
Sheela:Lekin ye log gaye kaha hai?
Adi's head strikes and he takes Pankhudi with her on the terrace .
There they saw a Beautiful Moment in front if their eyes..
Their Parents were sleeping on the terrace in a sitting position.
Avantika's head was on Harish's shoulder.
Adi: Pata hai Pankhudi..whenever I go on a camp from school na all the kids come with their parents..aur jab bhi mein waha mere friends ke parents ko saath mein dekhte tha na..I used to wonder ke kya kabhi mein Mom aur Dad saath mein dekh paunga..
Adi's eyes got wet while saying so..Pankhudi consoles him.
Adi by clearing his eyes and with his charming smile says:But now..I am the most happiest Person in the world...
Both Adi and Pankhudi side hug each other while standing and staring at the most beautiful sight infront of them.
Adi:They are my favorite couple in the universe.
Pankhudi:Mere bhi..
From the other side Sheela mami comes with others shouting.
That broke the sugary sleep of Avantika.
As Avantika's eyes open and seeing the surrounding she realises that at night while talking they sleep here only..
Avantika:Harish..utho..utho jaldi..
Harish's hasn't open his eyes yet..:Arre..Avantu so jao na abhi toh subha bhi nahi huyi..shaadi tumhe kal shaam ko hi karni hai..
Avantika:Just open ur eyes and see..Apni aankhe khologe tab pata chalega na..ki raat hai ya din..all are staring at us..Harish just wake up..
Harish while opening his eyes:kkyyyaaa hh??? And he stops in middle seeing all the members in front of them.
They immediately stands up..both were blushing..
Harish:Vo..romeo...hai..na vo..
Adi:Kya vo..Dad..boliye..main sunn raha hu.
Sheela:Harishji maine aapko kaha tha na..ki aap dono nahi mil sakte..
Harish:Arre..bhabhi vo zamaana ab gaya..
Avantika goes from there while saying:I'll just go and freshen up..
Sheela:Arre..Ruko...ruko..but Avantika goess as fastly as she can!
All laugh heartily..The Whole Sky, Clouds, witness this wonderful happy family..
Anuj:Chalo..chalo bohut kaam hai..
All were going Adi catches Harish hand and stopped him..while others went in the house.
Harish:Kya?
Adi: kya?
Harish:arre..kya?
Adi:kya..chal raha..aap toh bade romantic huye jaa rahe ho..
Harish:Aakhir Baap bete pe toh jaayega..
Both laughs and They hug each other tightly..
Adi:I am so happy for you..Nanu..Aap toh vaha bedhkar bohut khush honge..aap yahi toh chahte the na..I m missing you Nanu..
Harish:Aiee..not I am missing u..We are missing you Dad..!
At Evening:
In Adi-Pankhudi's room:
Pankhudi:Adi...jaldi kariye na...sab niche aa gaye honge..aap kabhi bhi time pe taiytar kyun nahi ho sakte..
Adi comes from washroom wearing a dhoti kurta..
Pankhudi laughs seeing him:Haha...ye kya kiya aapne..?
Adi:Arre..yaar toh mein kya karu..mujhe thik se dhoti bandhni nahi aati..
Pankhudi:Haan toh aapko kisne bola tha dhoti pehenne ko..
Adi:Ab sabne bola ki sab dhoti pehenne wale hai..toh maine bhi...
Pankhudi:Accha..accha thik he..ab seedhe khade rahiye hai..mein thik karti hu..
Adi:ok!
With their cute teasing the Favorite song plays in the background.
Pyar ka dard hai
Pyar ka dard hai meetha-meetha pyara-pyara
Meetha meetha pyara pyara
Ye haseen dard hi
Ye haseen dard hi
Do dilon ka hai sahara
Do dilon ka hai sahara
Thoda thoda chain bhi hai
Thodi thodi beqarari
Aur bhi ho pyar jawaan,
aarzoo hai yeh humari
Ye milan ho dobara...
Pyar ka dard hai Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara....
Scene shifts into hall:--
Harish comes at the main door with all the other mens.
Sheela:Chalo..Chalo..ladkiyon Dulhe miya aa gaye hai..
Adi:Mami dulhe miya ke saath unke bete bhi aaye hai ;-)
All laughs..
Sheela mami starts doing Aarti of Harish.
Sheela:Ab baari hai aapki naak khichne ki. Harish babu..
Harish:Bhabhi kya karengi aap meri naak khinch kar mera sar toh humesha aapki nanad ke saamne jhunka hi rehta hai..
Sheela :Harishji iss maamle mein bhi toh aaphi ki category mein aati hu..
Par rasam toh rasam hoti hai na..any how Sheela mami catches Harish's nose..
After that Harish is sitting in a Mandap..And here comes The Gorgeous Dulhan Avantika.
All ladies make Avantika sit in the Mandap..
Harish:Mein Ambulance ko call karta hu..
Avantika:Why?
Harish:Ab tum itni sundar lagogi..toh mera heart toh bichara overflow ho jaayega na..
Avantika smiles and say her favorite line:Shut up Harish!
Harish:Uff..iss Shut up ke toh hum deewane he..
Both smiles..
Panditji said them to stand up and do the varmaala rasam.
First Harish have to put Mala..
Adi and Rubal picks Avantika up..
Avantika:kya kar rahe ho..tum dono?
Adi:Common Dad..
Harish:Common ke bache..teri toh..
Adi:Aiieee..
Pankhudi:ahha..Dad..chaliye jaldi..Mom is waiting...
Harish anyhow puts the Varmaala ..
The hall is filled with applause.
Now its time for Avantika to put it.
Harish is moving backwards when Avantika is trying to put the Varmaala..
It happens two-three times..then Avantika glares at him.
Harish bends down his head and says:..darao mat yaar...Lo ab khush..
With the teasing and all smiling around superbly the Varmaala rasam is done.
Now Both the Dulha and Dulhan sits in the Mandap..
Panditji starts the mantra..Anuj and Sheela does the Kanyadaan..Harish puts the sindoor and ties the mangalsutra.
As all the rituals were done After sometime Harish and Avantika were sitting in the hall.
One side there were girls and otherside there were boys..to do some masti..
Abd there is a change here..all the girls are on Harish side and the boys on Avantika's side.
Adi:Kuch soch na Rubal..Kaise churaye hum joote..
Rubal:Arre..bhai..soch toh raha hu..ek toh humare yaha kitni shaadiya hoti hai..har baar naya idea sochna padta hai.
Sameer:Pehle ye pata karo ye joote hai kaha?
Adi:Hmm...point...
On the other side
Pankhudi:Kisiko bhi pata nahi chalna chahiye joote kaha hai..
Preeti:Aur khaas karke bhabhi aap..bilkul chup rehna..
Scene shifts to boys side:
Adi:Lekin pata kaise kiya jaaye...ye ladkiyan ka na badi chaalak hai..kuch solid idea sochna padega..
Rubal:Yess...maine soch liya hai..Shanky idhar aao..jaldi aur thik se meri baat suno..
After some time..
Adi and all the boys comes with two plate of sweet where all the members were sitting in the hall.
Adi:Wahh..wahh ye kya baat huyi..sab itne shaant bedhe huye hai..arre..mere Mom-Dad ki shaadi huyi hai..kuch meetha ho jaaye.
Preeti masi tells to Pankhudi very slowly:Kuch gadbad lag rahi hai...
Pankhudi:Haan..haan...kyun nahi..lao plate do..
Adi and Rubal happily gives the plates to Pankhudi and Payal.
All the ladies take a ladoo and comes towards their husband except HarTika and says:Aap itne pyaar se laaye hai toh pehle toh aap logo ko hi khaana chahiye na.
Adi:What??? Nahi nahi aise kaise..Mom ne sikhaaya hai mujhe.. Always Ladies First..
Harish:Arre..Romeo khaa lena ab Pankhudi de rahi hai toh..Harish comes to them and takes a ladoo..
And Eats it..
Adi:Dad..ye kya kiya?
Harish:Arre..ladoo khaya. Mujhe bhook lagi thi..
Adi:Lekin ye..
All the ladies together says:Arre..lekin..kuch..Kaise..kyun sab band karo..aur ye lo..
And they make all the boys eat ladoo forcefully.
Adi says while his mouth is filled with ladoos:Are you guys Mad? Ye kya kiya.
Pankhudi:kya Adi  ye toh sirf humne aapko ladoo khilaaya 
Adi and Rubal put their head on each other and says:Ye toh sirf hume hi pata hai ye kya the..and makes a crying face.
After some time in the hall all were sitting.
Harish makes a brrr..brrr...noise
Avantika:What are you doing Harish?
Harish:Brrr..Brrr..and puts his hand like he is driving a car.
Avantika:Stop this Harish..Are you out of your mind?
Harish:Mind...vo to out kaise aata hai?
Avantika:Harish kya hua hai..aisi behki behki baatein kyun kar rahe ho?
Adi:Mom..aapne mujhe chocolate kyun nahi di..? And starts crying like a child..
Avantika:Adi..tum bhi..
One by one all the boys were out of their senses.
Pankhudi:ye sab kya ho raahe?
Sheela:Mujhe lagta hai..inn sabke  andar bhoot aa gaya hai..mein abhi mere chunchun baba ko call karti hu..
Avantika:Stop it Bhabhi..Shanky aap itne dare huye kyun lag rahe hai ? Aapko pata hai ye sab kya ho raha hai? Tell me.
Shany:Vo badi baby..inn sabne naa..ladoo mein bhaang milvayi thi mujhse jo ye aap sabko kholaane wale the..taaki aap joote kaha rakhe hai vo bataa de..lekin dab ulta ho gaya.
All the ladies gets a shock and started laughing..
Preeti:haha...kya karne chale the aur kya ho gaya hai..
Kaira:I will make a video..mazzaa aayega..
Kaira started shooting.
Avantika:Men will be always be Mens...Chalo..lets take them to theur room..aur Shanky make lemon juice for all of them.
All the wives take their husbands to their respective rooms.
In Rubal-Payal room:---
Rubal:Adi I tell u mera idea kaam karega..hume jooto ka pata chal jaayega..sabse pehle toh payal hi bataa degi..
Payal:Oh...aisi baat hai Rubal..abhi bataati hu..jao lekar aao..
Payal talks to herself:Thik se khada bhi nahi reh paa raha hai..mujhe toh sahara dena pad raha hai aur joote lekar aayenge janaab!..huh..!
Rubal:Ooo..O...O...Ooooo..
Payal:Rubal..thik se chalo..aur please gaana mat gao..
Anyhow Payal takes Rubal to the bed and as soon as He sits on the bed..He just sleeps while murmuring.
Payal:Waise kaafi cute lag rahe ho..aise..
Scene shifts to Anuj-Sheela room:--
Sheela:Anuj kitne bhaari ho tum..mere naazuk haath tumhe sambhal bhi nahi paa rahe hai..
Anuj:Dholpur ki Dhol....chup ek dum chup..jab dekho tab jhut pe jhut...jhut pe jhut..
Sheela:Sorry..Anuj..Sorry..aage se kuch nahi bolungi..
Sheela to herself:Ye Kaunsi aatma aa gayi hai Anuj ke andar jisne usse Devanand se Amitabh Bacchhan bana diya??
In HarTika's room:
Both were sitting on the Bed.
Harish:Avantu..Avantu..Avantu..
Avantika:What hapoen Harish?
Harish:Mujhe kuch kehna hai?
Avantika:So Tell Me..
Harish:Vo kya hai na..mujhe na..mujhe na kuch kehna hai..
Avantika:Uff .So bolo..
Harish:Main bol raha hu ki Mujhe kuch kehna hai..
Avantika now shouts:Mujhe kuch nahi sunna..I don't want to listen anything..Sleep NOW.
Harish while saying this just fell on the bed and sleep:mujhe kuch kehna hai..
Avantika:Uhh..and glares at him first but then smiles..and says:MADDD!
In Adi-Pankhudi's room:
Adi:Muje taare ginne hai..
Pankhudi:Adi aap abhi hosh mein nahi ho..abhi so jaiye..subha jo karna hai vo karna..
Adi:Nahi..hosh mein to tu nahi hai..tujhe to ye bhi nahi pata ki subha toh taare hote hi nahi hai..
And he laughs.
Pankhudi:Mujhe pata hai..abhi aap please so jaiye hum kal RAAT ko taare ginege.
Adi:Nahi mujhe abhi ginna hai matlab abhi hi ginna hai..
And Adi forcefully takes Pankhudi to terrace while Pankhudi doesn't have any option left then to just handle Adi from falling.
Pankhudi:aap na bilkul bacche ki tarah behave karte hai..aur abhi toh bilkul bacche hi lag rahe hai..
On terrace with lights of moon and stars .
Adi:Hum taare ginte hai chal.
Pankhudi:Aap aise taare ginege khade rehkar?
Adi:haan to udkar ginnu??
Pankhudi :nahi mera matlab hai..yaha floor pe let jaaiye..
Adi:Lekin mujhe taare ginna hai..sona nahi hai.
Pankhudi:Aap pehle let toh jaiye.. and forcefully slowly push Adi on the terrace floor and As Adi was holding her she falls on him.
The Super Eyelock takes place with the PKDH song background.
Then Pankhudi also lie down beside him and says:Ab ginniye taare..
Adi:Tu bhi ginba mere saath..ye side mera aur vo side tera..
Pankhudi:thik he.
And Both started counting stars ..Pkdh title song continues...
END..
Waiting for the Comments ..whether it is good or bad they are always welcome!

Saturday, 5 July 2014

MISSION !

Hola Guys..This is demand of some of my friends and hopefully I am able to complete it..But don't know how it has shape up..so after reading..please let me know your Comments on Twitter.

Here I starts:


So After 4th July the story continues..I am not considering the precap and that Arif thing..in my story..no Ghonchus are allowed..:p
In the Morning Nilofer and all the Family members come back to Deewan Mansion.
 

Rubal gets a call from office informing He needs to go to Delhi for an urgent Meeting.
 

Adi asks him “what happened anything serious?”.  

Rubal:Yaa had to go to Delhi in the Evening…Urgent Meeting has been organized by our Company Associates about the new project.
 

Adi thinks that Rubal needs sometime with Payal in the current situation..so he tells to Rubal:I”ll Go..you don’t worry.
 

Rubal:But Adi you need rest..
 

Adi:Bohut rest kar liya mere bhai..ab yahi accha hoga ki mein apne aapko sudharu..varna Pankhudi naaraaz ho jaayegi na mujhse..!
 

Rubal:Thik he..mein tickets book karva deta hu shaam ki..
 

In the Evening..Adi is about to leave when Ayesha comes to meet him.
 

Ayesha:Apni dawaai li..
 

Adi:Haan.
 

Ayesha:Aur tickets?
 

Adi:yes
 

Adi:Ayesha tumhe ye sab karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai..mujhe apne aap ko sambhalna sikhna hoga..
 

Ayesha:Mujhe pata hai lekin ek dost ki hesiyat se to mein aapka khayal rakh sakti hu na..
 

Adi doesn’t say anything and bids bye and leaves for delhi.

At Night in the Balcony of a Hotel Room in Delhi..
Sky is filled with stars and a slight shape of moon..
 

Adi:I don’t know lekin log kehte hai ki iss duniyan se jaane ke baad hum tare ban jaate hai..lekin mujhe toh tu nazar hi nahi aa rahi Pankhudi..Main kya karu tum hi batau..itne prrofs hone ke baad bhi mera dil maanne ko hi taiyyar nahi hai ki tum nahi ho..
 

Adi just open his arms and by closing eyes tries to feel the fresh air and throws his all worries out..
 

In the Morning at Deewan Mansion in the Out House..
 

Nilofer:Ab hume yaha nahi rukna chahiye..ab jald se jald hume Dubai chale jaana chahiye..
 

Ayesha thinks:Ammi thik keh rahi hum jald se jald yaha se chale hi jaana chahiye kyunki hum itna to samaj hi chuke hai ki Adi sirf aur sirf Pankhudi se hi pyaar kar sakta hai..
 

Ayesha:Haan ammi hum kal subha hi nikal jaayenge..ab bohut ho gaya hum thak chuke hai iss sab se.
 

At Deewan Mansion:-
 

Avantika returns back and gets to know everything from Nani..
 

Nani:iss mein Harish babu ki koi galti nahi hai..vo sirf Adi ko ek nayi zindagi dena chahte the..
 

Avantika:haan mere bete ko maar kar..?
 

Harish was standing with heads down..
 

Nani:Nahi Avantika aisi baat nahi hai..
 

Avantika:Toh kaisi baat hai Maasi and where did you get the death proof of Pankhudi..I want to see..I will never believe that my Pankhu is dead.
 

Harish:vo Dr.Rustam..
 

Avantika:please Harish tum kuch na hi bolo to hi accha hoga..
 

Nani:Vo Dr.Rustam jo Adi ki treatment kar rahe the vo Kullu Landslide ki doctors team mein hai..and tells how Dr.Rustam got Pankhudi’s picture.
 

Avantika’s eyes was filled with tears she was unable to say anything..without saying anything she just went to her room and closed the door.
 

Harish and Nani went behind her and knocks the door.
 

Harish:Avantika please darwaaza kholo..mein manta hu mujhse galti ho gayi..lekin please ek baar meri baat sun lo.
 

Nani:Harish babu mujhe lagta hai hume usse thoda waqt dena chahiye vo bhi kisi baat sunne ke condition mein nahi hai..she needs sometime..
 

Both went from there and inside the room Avantika was sitting near the door crying.
 

Rubal and Payal differences were growing more and more and this time Sheela was on Payal’s side.
 

The Next Morning Avantika without informing anyone went somewhere..
 


In Delhi at Afternoon:-
 

Adi was talking with Rubal on phone.
 

Rubal:Hope meeting thik se ho gayi..
 

Adi:Haan meeting is done and we get the contract.
 

Rubal:Ye toh bohut acchi baat hai..tum kab wapas aa rahe ho..
 

Adi:Baarish ke wajese flight delay ho gayi hai..
 

Rubal:ok thik he..tu thik hai na?
 

Adi:Hmmm.. and hangs up the call.
 

Adi was returning back to hotel after meeting..His Mind was occupied by hundreds of thoughts of Pankhudi..He was lost somewhere.
 

When an old lady comes in front of his car and due to lack of concentration he hits slightly to the lady and hurt himself too on the head.
 

He just comes out hurriedly to see the lady first.
 

Adi:Aap..aap..aap..thik toh hai..I am really sorry..vo main..vo main..
 

Lady:Koi baat nahi beta mein thik hu..
 

Adi:I am really sorry..mujhe dhyan rakhna chahiye..
 

Adi makes the Lady stand up and bring some water and make her drink.
 

Lady:Arre..beta..tumhe toh sar par chot lagi huyi hai..
 

Adi:haan..voh..
 

Lady:Chalo mere saath mera ghar paas mein hi hai..
 

Adi:Nahi koi baat nahi Aunty mein thik hu..
 

Lady:maine kaha na chalo..abhi meri beti ko doctor dekhne hi aaye honge..vo tumhari treatment bhi kardenge..Chalo jaldi..
 

Adi smiles and says:ok!
 

Adi went to the Lady’s house.
 

Lady:Betho beta mein abhi aati hu…Adi sees around there are lots of pictures of the lady with a cute girl of 7 yrs.. he thinks he must be her daughter
 

Lady comes with water and says :Doctor abhi aate hi honge meri beti se milne ke liye..
 

Adi:aapki beti bohut pyaari hai..
 

Lady:yes..She is beautiful..My Doll..
 

Adi:Can I ask kya hua hai usse..matlab doctor and all?
 

Lady:Oh..doctor to meri dusri beti ko dekhne aa rahe hai..meri ye beti to mere dil mein rehti hai..she doesn't stay in this world.
 

Adi:Oh..I am sorry..waise aapki dusri beti ko hua kiya hai..
 

Adi was feeling weird about himself why he was so curious to know about an unknown person..
 

Lady:vo yeh hai ki..
 

Adi gets a call from office..
 

Adi:Excuse me..
 

Lady:Tum baat kar lo mein tumhare liye kuch khaane ke liye lekar ati hu..
 

Adi went outside the house in the garden and attends the call.
As he hangs up the call and turns back he sees a window of the house.
 

The curtains were flying and something was happening to Adi..He doesn't know why but he was just getting attracted to see..he goes slowly and slowly near the window and was about to move the curtains when the Lady call himfrom back.
(just tried to create something like their first meeting..Curtains ..kullu..remember :p)
 

Adi:Oh..yaa coming and he went away inside.
Inside the House Lady tells Adi about her second daughter.
 

Lady:Actually meri dusri beti mere liye jeene ka dusra mauka lekar aayi hai..
 

Adi:Matlab?
 

Lady:Ye mujhe do saal pehle mili thi...vo mujhe nahi pehchaanti lekin mere liye vo meri beti jaisi hai..do saal se coma mein hai isiliye doctor check up karne aate hai week mein..
 

Lady:Naahi mein uska naam jaanti hu..aur nahi uski family ko..sirf jab vo mili thi sirf ek naam suna tha usse "ADI"
 

Adi gets a shock hearing this..He Felt numb..He get curious to know more..
 

Adi:Vo.vo..ye aapko kaha mili thi......?
 

Lady:Do saal pehle jo kullu ki landslide huyi thi..waha uss waqt mujhe behoshi ki haalat mein mili thi..behoshi ki haalat mein bhi vo ek hi naam bole jaa rahi thi "Adi"
 

Adi was unable to express anything ..a sudden hope has arrived inside him.
 

Lady:Do saal se vo coma mein hai..toh hume pata hi nahi hai..kaha rehti thi pehle..kaha hai iska parivaar..ya koi hai bhi ya nahi..
 

Adi eyes have become all red..with great difficulty he asks the lady:Kya mein usse mil sakta hu?
 

Seeing Adi like this She felt strange and ask him:aap thik toh ho beta..
 

Adi:Haan..haan..mein thik h..pl..please mu..mujhe ek baar usse milna hai..
 

Lady feels weird and says:Accha thik he chalo..
 

And both wents towards the room
 

Adi's heart was beating fast..he was unable to walk properly..(with the background music of PKDH)
 

The Lady open the door and as Adi entered ..she says:Yeh hai meri beti..
 

Adi see the girl who is on the bed with the eyes closed..The Girl was "Pankhudi"..
 

Adi was all surrounded by lots of mixed emotions..Happy..sad..his eyes were filled with tears..he was unable to understand how to react

He anyhow went near the bed..sit near the bed on the floor and the word that somehow comes from his mouth was:"PANKHUDIIII"
 

The lady was shocked to know that this guy knows her name..
 

Adi takes her hand and was only murmuring:Pankhudi.haann...Pankhudi..Pankhudi...
 

Adi:Mujhe pata tha tu mujhe kabhi chodkar nahi jaa sakti..Pankhudi..
 

He was crying like a small baby holding her hand..
 

After some time the Lady comes near Adi when he gets calm.
 

Lady:Beta tum isse kaise jaante ho?
 

Adi:Ahh..Aunty ye meri zindagi hai..She is my Life..My Wife..Pankhudi..
 

Adi just turns towards the lady and while folding hands tell her:Aapka bohut bohut shukriya..aap nahi jaante aapne mere liye kya kiya hai..Thank you so..so much..
 

Lady was shocked to know this she was too in tears..
 

Adi:Lekin ye kuch bol kyun nahi rahi..isse boliye na kuch bole..boliye na iske Adi ne ise dhund liya..
 

Lady:Beta ye do saal se coma mein hain..
 

Adi was overwhelmed to see his life Alive..he just says:Koi baat nahi ab mein aa gaya hu na..ab isse ko mein bole bhi naa rehne hi nahi dunga..
 

Adi sits again near the bed holding her hands and says:Pankhudi..ab tujhe kaise bhi karke uthna hoga..apne Adi ke liye..Ladna hoga mujhse..daantna hoga..meri shikayat karni hogi mom se..sabki problem solve karni hai hume milkar..tujhe firse Detective ki post sambhalni hai..bohut kuch karna hai..he gets up and kisses her beloved lady on the forehead and says:Sab thi kar dunga mein..bass tu mera saath kabhi nahi chodna..
 

Adi turn towards the lady and says:Mein samaj sakta hu aap abhi kaisa feel kar rahi hogi..par aapko chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi..aapne Pankhudi ko apni beti maana hai..aur vo aapki beti hamesha rahegi..
 

Lady:Mein jaanti hu beta..mein jaanti thi kabhi na kabhi to isse apne parivaar ke paas jaana hi hoga..le jao isse..lekin meri beti ka acche se khayal rakhna..kuch bhi problem huyi mein isse lene aa jaungi..
 

Adi smiles..
 

He just gets involved in all the work to get Pankhudi back to Mumbai..He met with her doctor gets all the details of her file and may other things..
 

Next Morning in the Deewan Mansion..Today too Avantika was not there..
 

All were sitting in the hall..
 

Harish asks rubal:Adi kab wapas aa raha hai?
 

Rubal:Harish Uncle meri usse kal hi baat hui thi..meine abhi try kiya lekin uska phone not reachable hai..rukiye mein phirse try karta hu..and a voice came
 

Adi:Iski koi jarurat nahi hai..I am Back..
 

All gets up to see Adi and gets shock to see him so happy.
 

Rubal:Adi..kya hua hai..tum bohut khush lag rahe ho..
 

Adi:Haan..mein bohut bohut khush hu...meri zindagi jo mujhe wapas mil gayi hai..
 

Nani:Kya matlab?
 

Adi:Meri Zindagi..Meri Life..Aapki Bahu..Mere Nanu ki bahu..PANKHUDI...
 

And a nurse came holding the wheel chair ..
 

Pankhudi was sitting on it..with eyes closed..
 

All were shocked to see her like this..It was unbelievable..
 

Ayesha's family were living for Dubai and were came to meet the deewans so they were also present..Ayesha gets extremely shocked to see her look-a-like..
 

Adi goes and told nurse:Aap upar jaakar room taiyar kariye mein lekar aata hu pankhudi ko..
 

He comes in the middle of the hall with Pankhudi..and Tells Everything what happen in Delhi..
 

Nani:Lekin Adi..vo phir..Death Certificate..pankhudi ka photo aur..
Just then at the moment a roaring voice came..and Avantika makes a dhamaakedaar entry saying: I tell you Maasi..
 

Avantika comes near Pankhudi..sits near her,She was overwhelmed with emotions just move his hand on Pankhudi's head with teary eyes..
 

She gets up and turns towards all others..
 

Avantika:Maasi..Death Certificate is Fake..
 

Nani:Kya?
 

Avantika:Haan..Maasi..jab main kal Dr.Rustam ko milne gayi to waha unhe kisika call aaya tha
 

FLASHBACK:
 

Avantika was sitting with Dr.Rustam in his cabin and he was occupied with a call
 

Dr.Rustam:Lekin yaha toh..?..Ok..I"ll see to it...
 

Dr.Rustam gets worried after the call
 

Avantika:Any problem Doctor?
 

Dr.Rustam:Haan vo kullu landslide ki jo dead bodies ke face restructure kiye the humaare specialists ne..un hone kaha ki they have sent me 5 Photos via Fax..lekin mujhe to 6 mile hai..How's this possible?Something is not right..
 

Avantika:There must be some problem in fax machine..where is it?
 

Dr.Rustam:Ya..may be come let's see..its in one of my colleauge's room
 

Both of them went to that doctor's room where fax machine was there..
 

They both checked the Machine it was all working correctly..
 

Dr.Rustam:Machine toh chal rahi hai thik se..toh phir aise kaise..
 

Avantika:Ya..the machine is working properly and Avantika at the moment see a camera in the cabin.
 

Avantika:Doc..There is something fishy about it..why don't you check the video recordings of the room..
 

Dr.rustam:Yes i call the ward boy and will get a CD till tomoro..
Then today in the morning Avantika gets a call from Dr.Rustam and she immediately went to meet him
 

There She finds what had Arif and Nafisa was doing there..And She gets shock to see that when other doctor went from the cabin..Arif made a sketch of Pankhudi's face as he has seen Ayesha and put it on the Fax Machine..
 

Flashback Ends....
 

Avantika:From there we all know after that what happen..
 

Nilofer gives a tight slap to Nafisa...Rubal also gets to know Nafisa's true face..
 

Ayesha comes near Adi and Pankhudi.
 

Ayesha:Hum aaj yaha se jaa rahe..hum bohut khush hai ki tumhe apni Pankhudi mil gayi..ab uske saath hi chipku bane ghumte firna..
 

Adi smiles..
 

Ayesha bends down to Pankhudi and says:Pankhudi..Tum bohut Lucky ho..tumhe bohut bohut accha shohar mil hai...jo tumse be intehaa mohabbat karta hai...ab jaldi se thik ho jao..aur is chipku ko bhi thik karo..
 

She gets up and says to Adi:Is dost ko kabhi bhulna mat warna hum aapke sapne mein aake bohut daraayenge aapko...
 

Adi smiles.
 

She turns towards Nilofer and says:Ammi..Chale..
 

Nilofer to Nani:Ab hume chalna chahiye..Hume maaf kariyega jo bhi nafisa ne kiya..vo..
 

Nani:Niloferji aap kyun maafi maang rahi hai..hume to aapka shukra guzar hona chahiye..aapne humari bohut madad ki hai..
 

They bids bye to all ..AdiPankhudi and Ayesha went on the opposites sides..
 

She went on the door side and they went near the staircase side..
Ayesha last time turns back while going out and see Adi taking Pankhudi in his arms and climbing up the stairs..
 

Ayesha thinks:Adi..hum jaan chuke hai ki aap humesha aapki Pankhudi se hi pyaar karenge..Aap bohut hi acche insaan hai..Allah kare Pankhudi jald se jald thik ho jaaye aur Aap dono hamesha Khush rahe..

Ayesha and Family went from their lives.....

END...

Huh..Now i am really tired..so stopping it here..with some unspoken words..Some Love ..Some Happiness to get his life back..Some Guilt to know that He has cheated on her wife and belief someone else..Some Anger after Knowing her Husband's plan about her own son..n many many mixed feelings.
 
Ahh..Ok..So Have completed and have bring Pankhudi back..Read it if you like it..I'll continue and do not forget to leave your comments on Twitter and spread it!


Friday, 6 June 2014

Kahin..Unkahin..Baatein Part-6

Let’s  have a Recap Moment as you guys have forgotten as I am writing after so long…
HarTika Anniversary celebrating discussion—Harish Proposed Avantika—The Haldi Function with the Marathi Tadka of Navrai Machi song—Sangeet Function with the Superb Light surroundings—AdiPankhudi and PayalRubal hosting--AnujSameer Dances on Dil da maamla song—and SheelaMamiAvantika Dola re Dola re Dance.

Now Starts:---

As the Performance of Avantika and Sheela Mami finishes…Its time for next Performance..

Adi:-Haaye..I am surrounded by how Beautiful and Talented Womens..

Pankhudi:Womens are always Beautiful and Talented..

Payal: Now Let’s see our next jodi..take out the names..

Rubal: Yes and the First Name is Preeti Maasi

Pankhudi:And the Second name is :’’Arre..Do Cheats ek saath hai..”

Payal:Koi Baat nahi Hum Teen Ka Tadka kardenge..So the First name is:

Pankhudi:Adi..

Adi:”Woww”aur dusra naam?

Pankhudi:Rubal Bhaiya

Adi: Chal mera bhai…aur Maasi..Let’s rock..!

All the Members clap around..

Lights were off on the stage

Adi and Rubal:- (My desi girl  ….My desi girl
Girl… girl… girl… girl) —– 2

Lights on and Preeti Masi came on the stage with the desi girl look and the dance starts

Adi: Jhumka gira de


Rubal:Jo milale agar woh nazar se nazar mein taale


Adi:Nachke dikade,


Rubal:Sabki dhadkan mein kadam se kadam milale


Adi:Lehron si chaal pe chaal bichade


Rubal:Dil ko yun behaal bana de


Adi:Par deewane mane
Na dekhi koi aisi girl(Na dekhi koi aisi girl)

Rubal and Adi:Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Ain’t nobody like my desi girl
Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Sab toh soni saadi desi girl
Who’s the hottest girl in the world?
My desi girl
My desi girl
Thumka lagaike she’ll rock your world
My desi girl
My desi girl

My desi girl
My desi girl


Preeti: Jahan jahan bhi jau main
Saari nazrein toh peche peche aaye
Ruku zara mein jo yahan
Thandi thandi saari saanse tham jaye
Sabki nigahon ne hai kaha
Ke khwaabon mein hai dekhi meri jaisi girl
Meri jaisi girl


Adi and Rubal: Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Ain’t nobody like my desi girl
Dekhi lakh lakh pardesi girl
Sab ko soni lagthi desi girl

My desi girl
My desi girl
Girl girl girl girl girl girl…..


The Dance ends and the terrace was full with claps all around.

Payal:Wahh..Wahh..Kya baat hai..!Desi girl and the Desi Mundas Rocks!

Adi and Rubal pulling their collar upwards:We Always Rock!

Pankhudi:haha…dekhenge..abhi hum stage par gaye nahi hai..fir dekhenge who Rocks!

Adi:Toh jaiye na kisne roka hai..

Rubal:Haa..Haa..Jaiye..So the Next Performance is Pankhudi,Payal and Harish Uncle..

Sheela:Yeyye!..Payal aur Pankhudi meri naak mat katwana acche se karna..

Payal:Jee Mom!

Starts:-

Harish: Say shava shava, say shava shava - 2
Harish:
Roop hai tera sona, soni teri paayal
Hoye, roop hai tera sona sona, soni teri paayal
Chhan chhana chhan aise chhanke, kar de sabko ghaayal

Keh raha aankhon ka kaajal, ishq mein jeena marna, yay

--ALL Three Together--

Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava maahiyaSay shava shava maahiya, say shava shava, yea

--Payal and Pankhudi--
Roop hai mera sona, soni meri paayal
Roop hai mera sona sona, soni meri paayal
Chhan chhana chhan aise chhanke, kar de sabko ghaayal

--Harish--

Hey, keh raha aankhon ka kaajal, ishq mein jeena marnaEverybody!

--ALL--
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava maahiya
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava

And the Last Performance of the Evening the whole Family Together
Song According to this Video
After the Dhamaakedaar Sangeet..all were really very tired so just got into the room but When Harish was about to go into Avantika's room

Sheela Mami,Payal, Pankhudi and Preeti were standing outside blocking his way.

Harish:Kya?

Preeti:Aap andar nahi jaa sakte!

Harish:lekin kyun?

Pankhudi:Shaadi se pehle aap Mom se nahi mil sakte

Sheela:Harish ji aaj jaakar guest room mein so jaiye..

Harish:Arre..Lekin abhi kuch hi der mein humari Anniversary hai mujhe Avantika ko wish karna hai..

Payal:It's not possible

Adi and Rubal also join Harish

Rubal:Why not possible? All is possible when this Rocking brothers are Here..Harish uncle ko bua se milna hai aur vo milenge.

Adi:Yes..aur vo bhi thik 12 baje..That's a challenge to all you ladies

Preeti:Accha ji challenge...dekhte hai

Pankhudi:Lekin abhi ke liye..you're are not allowed in the room..

All the ladies went inside the room and Sheela mami closed the door on their faces.


Scene shifts to Adi's room:-

Harish:challenge lagaa ke aa gaya..ladies log hume room ke aas paas to jaane nahi de rahe aur Avantika se milne degi ye to bohut dur ki baat hai.

Adi:Dad mein apni Mom ka beta hu..aur mere paas bhi Mom ki tarah har ek problem ka solution hota hai..

Harish:Haan..Mom ka beta..tu mera bhi beta hai..aur mera saare plan fail ho jaata hai teri Mom ke mamle hai..so. Beta Romeo...

Adi :Arre..Dad..Not to Worry when Adi is hear..mere paas ek solid plan hai..sab idhar aaiye..

And Adi tells the plan to all the Members.

Adi:Ye log hume darwaaze se to jaane nahi denge..lekin khidki to hai na..

Harish:Paagal…tujhe lagta hai ki mein iss tamaatar jaise avtar mein pipe chad sakta hu..khidki tak pohunchne ke liye?

Rubal:Uska bhi ilaaj hai mere paas..decorations wale apni ladder yaha bhul gaye hai..

Sameer:Mein aur Anuj bhaiya baaki sab ka mind distract karne ke liye room ke door ki taraf jaate hai..

Rubal:Aur mein aur Adi..Harish uncle ke saath jaate hai..!

Adi:Wooww..so the PLAN is READDYY!Let’s Go Guys!


Scene shifts to Avantika’s room:

All the Ladies were present in the room.

Avantika was reading a book where as all the others were standing in a circle near the door

Payal:The door will be not open before 12.00!khaas karke Mom aap sun lijiye.

Sheela:Oh..Bahurani tu apne aap ko hi samjha..I am very int..ent..ilejent..

Payal:Mom..Intelligent?

Sheela:Haan..Wahi..Badi angrez mat ban Avantika ki tarah!

Avantika sitting on the bed and says:What’s going on?

Preeti:Ahh..Ah..Nothing Di..!

Pankhudi:Kuch nahi…

Avantika:But why you all are here..do you guys want anything?

Preeti laughingly says:Vo kya hai na..Jiju aapko 12 baje wish karna chahte the lekin humne unhe bahar se hi bhaga diya..

Avantika:Why?

Sheela:Why..Matlab?Aap dono shaadi se pehle nahi mil sakte..

Avantika:Ok!

Preeti:sirf Ok..sirf.. di..kuch to expression dete sad wale…aap na ek dum Unique piece ho..ek dum alag sabse..

Sheela:Isiliye to vo Avantika hai..

All the ladies laugh..

Preeti:Oh..Di..Kal aapki shaadi hone wali hai..aur aap book padh rahi hai..lets sit and talk..some wifey talks..

Sheela:Haan..Avantika..thodi baatein apni bhabhi se bhi karlo..kitne dino se hum lade nahi nahi..Chalo Ladte hai..

Avantika:Bhabhi..!

Sheela:ahaa..Samaj gayi..samaj gayi..sirf baatein karte hai!

At 11:50:-

All the ladies were sitting in a circle on the bed and talking..while Sameer and Anuj knocks on the door.

Pankhudi:Aa gaye..All of them except Avantika went near the door..but haven’t open the door..

Preeti:Kaun hai

Sameer:Preeti..mein sameer..

Preeti:Haan bolo kya hai

Sameer :Arre darwaaza to kholo aisa kaise baat karenge..

Sheela:Nahi Sameer..Darwaaza to nahi khulega..

Anuj:Sheela…ye kaisi baat hui?

Sheela:Anuj tum bhi ho?

At that time near the window outside..

Harish to himself:Yaar Papa ko bhi itni unchai pe ghar banaana tha..ground floor ke room tak bhi sidi se chadke jaana padh raha hai.

Harish:Romeo..Rubal...pakadna sidi ko acche se..Abhi tak meri shaadi hui nahi hai..kal hai..

Adi:Haan to ek baar to ho hi chuki hai na..

Harish:To kya dobara karne se pehle taange tod lu..

Rubal:Nahi..Nahi..Harish uncle aap chadiye..Hum kaske pakdenge..

The other ladies were busy near the door side when Harish enters the room.

Avantika was standing near the bed..facing the door.. Without making any noise he goes near her and whispers in her Ear “Happy Anniversary”

Avantika with sudden voice turns around and sees Harish

And the clock strikes 12!

All the ladies without noticing Harish:

Yeyyyyeeee!hum jeet gaye..hum jeet gaye…

And opens the door

Preeti:Wooww..We Won..!

Sameer:Aa…Ahha..jaara piche mudke dekhiye..mohtarmaas..

And as all the ladies turn around they got a shock seeing Harish..

Pankhudi:Papa..Aap..aap..lekin yaha aaye kaise..

Adi say while entering from Window followed by Rubal:Yaha se..

Rubal :To kya keh rahe the aap log kaun jeeta Payal?

Payal:Vo..vo…..

All the Mens stand together in a line and scream:WE WONNNN!

Their Laughter teasing goes On and ON like this…!

After that when all the couples went to their rooms Harish was about to go in Guest room as per Sheela Mami’s instructions..Avantika holds his hand and says:Wait..!

Harish:Kya hua?

Avantika:Tumne to wish kar liya mujhe to wish karne do..

Harish Smiles

Avantika:Happy Anniversary Harish.!

And they Hug each other..


Scene shifts to Adi-Pankhudi room:

Both were sitting on the bed..

Adi:Pankhudi hum bhi apni 25th Anniversary pe firse shaadi karenge..

Pankhudi:Aur kitni baar shaadi karenge Adi..already do baar kar chuke hai..

Adi:Dekh ek baar acche se shaadi hui..lekin ek baar to maine direct sindoor hi bhar diya thana..without all rasams na..aur saath mein extenson mein thappad bhi mila tha..(while rubbing his cheeks)

Pankhudi:Haan..toh aisa koi karta hai..

Adi:us waqt mein thoda crack thaana..

Pankhudi:Haan vo bhi sahi hai..

Adi:Kya sahi hai..?Matlab mein paagal tha..

Pankhudi:Vo to abhi bhi ho

Adi:Accha..ruk bata ta hu..

And their everwonderful ..Pillow Fight starts..with the most favourite song of all the pkdhians in 
background “PYAR KA DARD HAI….MEETHA MEETHA….PYAARA PYAARA..”!

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