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Now here is the next part of Pal..Aur ek Faisla..which i renamed it to..Kahi..Unkahin..Baatein..Given by one of my reader and my friend..
Hope you will like it..Starting from some what recap..so that you can connect the chain of the story
All
four are sitting near the Marine Drive..
Both
Harish and Adi and gets up..
Adi:Dad..Chaliye
na hum yaha se aage chalte hai..
Avantika:No..No..You
both are not going..yaha hi bedhe raho chup-chap..
Both
sits down silently..
Harish
mimics Avantika:yaha hi bedhe raho chup-chap..
Avantika:Very
Funny..
Harish:Kya
yaar tum hum par hukum kar sakti ho…lekin tum kisiki ka bhi order nahi maan
sakti..
Avantika:Kaunsa
Order??
Harish:Yahi
ki you will not be a donor..
Avantika:Not
again Harish…
Harish:I
am not fighting at all..he hold her hands..dekho please meri poori baat suno..I
know tumhe Preeti ki bohut fikr hai..aur vo hum sab ko bhi hai..and we will find
a donor in few days..
Adi:Aur
Mom aapko BP problems hai..itni jaldi aapka pressure high ho jaata hai you
can’t control your anger..
Avantika:Lekin
Harish-Adi agar in kuch dino mein Preeti ko kuch ho gaya to..mein apne aap ko
kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paungi…
Pankhudi:Aur
Dad-Adi..aaplog agar mom ki place pe hote to aap kya karte bataaiye..?
Both
Harish and Adi becomes Mum…
Avantika:I
need your support Harish…please maan jao..
Harish
stares at her Lovingly..and says:Tumhe pata hai tum bohot ziddi ho?
Avantika
nods her head like a small baby.
Harish:par..agar
tumhe kuch hua na..mein apne aap ko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paunga..
Avantika:kuch
nahi hoga Mujhe Harish..mere saath meri puri family hai..looking towards Adi
:Hain Na??
Adi
just gives up and says:Ofcourse Hai…:Pata nahi saare ziddi log mere hi naseeb
mein hai!!
All
Laugh together…
Pankhudi:Aapko
to Adi mein…
Harish:Bass..Bass..Butterfly
abhi nahi..varna fir hum dono ki bhi ladaai shuru ho jaayegi..and I don’t want
my Dabbang Lady in Action at the Moment…
All
Four of them..Laugh a lot..with their cute nok-jhoks…and…….
Flashback
Ended…
28th
Fabruary 2014 ..
Pankhudi:That
was the Last day where I have seen Adi and Dad Happy…
Pankhudi
ko pata hi nahi chala..aaj bhi subha kaise ho gayi…raat bhar vo bas us pal ko
yaad karti rahi jisne sabki zindagi badal di..
Aur
Adi..usse pata hi nahi chala kab vo hall mein hi kaam karte karte so gaya..
Pankhudi
comes in the Hall..at the Moment Adi also gets up..
Pankhudi:Adi..aap
ready ho jaiye..mein breakfast ready karti hu..
Adi:Hmm..aur
fir hume wahan bhi jaana hai..Dad Kaha hai?
Pankhudi:Wahi
hai..
Adi:Raat
ko wapas nahi aaye?
Pankhudi:Nahi..
Pankhudi:Nahi..
Adi:Ok..thik
he..mein ready ho jaata hu..aur fir hum bhi chalte hai..
Pankhudi:Lekin
Adi..Breakfast?
Adi:Mujhe
bhook nahi hai..
Pankhudi:Par
Adi aapne raat ko bhi thik se nahi khaaya tha..abhi to..
Adi:Meine
kaha na..I don’t want to eat..can’t you understand..
Tears
welled up in Pankhudi’s eyes..
Adi
also realized he was Rude..ruffles his hair in disbelief
Adi:I
am Sorry…and goes up in this room..
Pankhudi
thinks:Adi mein jaanti hu..aapko mujhe hurt karne ka koi iraada nahi tha..mein
aapko aise nahi dekh sakti…plzz MOM vapas Aajaiye..
Scene
shifts to the Hospital…
Harish
is sitting near the bed holding the hand of the Lady..who is sleeping on the
bed.....The Kidney transfer was successful..but Due to the high blood pressure
problem.. She is in Coma for a month
Harish:Maine
kaha tha tumse mein apne aapko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paunga..agar tumhe kuch
ho gaya to…
Plzz
wapas aa jao Avantika..mujhe meri daandti hui..Ladti hui…Chillati hui..gussa
karti…Avantika wapas chahiye…
Adi
and Pankhudi are standing outside the room of the hospital and seeing this…
Both
are feeling helpless..this One Month has been tremendously vulnerable for
them..From One Month they are daily seeing this..but can’t do anything..
Both
wipes their tears and enters the room…
By
seeing them entering Harish also wipes his tears and behaves to be normal..
Adi:Hi..Dad..Hi..Mom…Pata
hai Mom aaj bhi iske saath mera jhagda hua..koi bhi baat meri maanti hi nahi..
Pankhudi:Mom..meri
galti nahi thi..Fir bhi Adi ne mujhe daanta..Aap please uthiye aur inhe khub
daantiye..
Adi:Mom..Plzz
Uthiye na..mein aapki daant kya..thappad khaane ko bhi taiyyar hu..
Harish,Pankhudi,Aditya..all
the family members come everyday..as the doctors have said that this
communication can help her to be out of Coma soon…
Preeti
arrives at the hospital..She is the one who is feeling utmost guilt due to the
condition of her sister…She is standing near the door..because she knows No one
tell anything to her but all this has been arose because of her only..
Pankhudi:Arre..Maasi..aaiye
na..dekhiye Mom..Maasi aai he..aur vo bhi aapke favourite flowers lekar..
Preeti:Hi..di..Dekhiye
mein aapke favourite flowers layi hu..aur maine bilkul bhi cheating nahi ki is
baar..its exact 24 flowers !
Adi:oh
Wow.Maasi!Half flowers meri taraf se..
Preeti:No
Adi..whole credit goes to me..
Harish
gets up from her seat and tries to move out..
Preeti:Jiju..rukiye na..yahi
pe..
Harish: mujhe Avantika ki reports bhi collect karni hai..I am going there..
Harish: mujhe Avantika ki reports bhi collect karni hai..I am going there..
Vo
Chulbula sa Jija-Saali ka rishta bhi kahi kho gaya tha..Preeti ko lagta hai ki
Harish usse naaraz hai..lekin Harish Preeti se khafa bilkul nahi the..vo to apne
aapse naaraz the…
He
was going out of the room when Doctors enters in the room:
Doctor:Hello..So
Whole Kumar Family is here..That’s Great..
Adi:Hello..Doctor..aaj
Mom ki reports aane vali thi na..?
Doctor:Oh..Yaa..Mr.Kumar
and there is a good news..Mrs.Kumar is out of Coma…
The
moment Doctor speaks..all their happiness knew no bounds…They are the happiest
people in the world right know...
Harish:Lekin
Doctor..Avantika to abhi bhi…
Doctor:Yes..Mr.Kumar..vo
coma se bahar aa chuki hai..lekin unhe hosh aane mein thoda waqt lagega..jaise
hi injections ka asar jaayega…She will be Back..
Harish:Thank
you ..Thank you so much Doctor…
Adi:Thank
you so much…
Both
Adi and Harish Hugs each other tightly which was very much needed
Pankhudi
and Preeti also hugs each other tight as much as they can..
All
have tears in their eyes..but this are of happiness…
Preeti
sees Harish with teary eyes and tells:Congatulations Jiju..Di waapas aa rahi
hai…
Both
of them Forgetting everything Hug each other..
Harsih:Haan..Hamari
Dabang Lady waapas aarahi hai…
All
laugh with immense Happiness…
Adi:Dad..aap
sab log ghar jaaiye..mein yaha rukta hu…
Pankhudi:Nahi
Adi..Aap sab jaaiye..mein Mom ke paas rukti hu..
Preeti:No
Adi-Pankhu..mein yaha rukti hu..
Harish:Bass…ho
gaya sabka..Mein yaha ruk raha hu..kyunki mein chahta hu ki jaise hi Avantika
aankhe khole sabse pehle vo mujhe dekhe..
Adi:Wohhooo..Dad!Romantic-Shumatic
Dad mere aa gaye…
Harish:Ab
meri Hitler Queen wapas aa rahi hai to Comedian-King Harish ko to wapas aana hi
tha..!
Adi: I
miss U Dad…!
Both
had a Fatherly hug…
Adi:Lekin..Lekin..mein
yahi rahunga..jab tak mom ko hosh nahi aata..
Pankhudi:Mein
bhi..
Preeti:Mein
bhi…
Harish:Thik
he aap sab bahar bhed sakte ho..
Adi:Ok..Dad!
Few
Hours spent waiting and waiting…
In
the Evening :
Harish
was sitting with eyes closed…but a sudden moment on his hand..make him to open
his eyes..And here He sees what he was longing to see..Her Lady Love is holding
her hand having a perfect smile on her face..which he misses a lot…
Harish:Avantikaa..Heaving
a sigh of relief..he hold his hand as tightly as he can…and kisses her hand…
Avantika:Harish…
Harish:Aaha..Abhi
kuch nahi..chup…Pehle thik ho jao..fir jitna bolna hai..utna bolna..daantna...ladna gusaa karna...I "ll call Adi..Addiii
Adi
comes running inside the room followed by Pankhudi and Preeti Maasi..
Adi:Mom..!Adi
had tears in his eyes..that was stopped from a month…which started flowing..
He
comes and Hugs her mom and cry like a small Baby…
Avantika:Adi..Darling..Don’t
cry..
Adi:Promise
me mom..you will never leave me again like this..
Avantika
just nods her head…
Adi
gets up wiping his tears and says:Now no more sadness..
Preeti
comes and sit near the bed:Di..I am So Sorry..meri wajese..ye sab..
Avantika:Preeti..Ye
mera faisla tha..aur mujhe iska bilkul bhi afsos nahi hai..
Avantika
and Both Preeti hugs..
Adi:Bas..Massi..Mom..Now
no more tears..
Pankhudi:Yes..Adi..Ab
aap jaldi se thik ho jaaiye Mom..aur fir hum milkar aapki aur Dad ki
Anniversary celebrate karenge..bilkul pehle ki tarha
And
at the moment Kaira,Rubal,Payal,Sheela Mami,Anuj Mama,Sameer enters the room
and says:Aur Hum Bhi…
Everone
Meet Avantika whole heartedly and wishes her to Get Well Soon..
Days
Passed By..Avantika is recovering speedily by a medicine in a form of full of immense love she is getting from her family….
She
is back Home in Deewan Mansion..All are taking care of her with utmost
sincerity..infact Sheela Mami too misses her Nanad a lot while she was in
Coma..She too cares about her..
Now Avantika is Completely Fit and Fine and Back to Normal Life…
All
the Family Members are sitting in the Hall Having an some Light Food with Tea..
Pankhudi
is in Kitchen..Adi comes there by making some excuse to others..
Adi
comes..
Pankhudi:Adi..kuch
chahiye tha aapko..
Adi:Hmm….
Pankhudi:Kya?
Adi:Maafi..
Pankhudi:Lekin
aapne kya galti ki?
Adi:Pankhudi
is ek mahine mein maine tujhse thikse baat tak nahi ki..I am really sorry…
Pankhudi
faces Adi and putting her hand on his cheek she says:Adi..aapko mujhse maafi
maangne ki koi jarurat nahi..mein jaanti hu vo waqt humaari zindagi ka sabse
mushkil waqt tha..mein aapse naaraz thi lekin isliye nahi ki aap mujhse thik se
baat nahi kar rahe the..balki isliye kyunki aap apna dard mujhse nahi baant
rahe the..
Adi:I
Love You..
Pankhudi:I
Love you too
Both
had a Brief Hug…
At
that moment Rubal,Kaira and Payal comes and says Loudly:I Love You
Three,Four..Five..Sixx…
Adi
whispers:Aa gaye Haddis…
Kaira:Kya
Kaha..Adi?
Adi:Ahha..Kuch
Nahi..
Rubal:Oh..Mere
Bhai jyaada ban mat..hum tujhe haddi lagte hai?
Adi:Aur
Nahi to kya?Jab dekho tab aa jaate ho..
Kaira:Haan
to ye tera badroom nahi hai ki jaha chahe tu romantic ho jaye..
Pankhudi
was all the while blushing..
Payal:Bass..Bass…Bohot
ho gaya..hum jo yaha planning karne aaye hai vo kare..
Adi:Kaisi
Planning?
Pankhudi:Adi..sab
bhul jaate hai aap..Mom aur Dad ki Anniversary aa rahi hai..to ye sab ke baad ek
bada sa celebration hona chahiye na..
Adi:Oh..Haan..Sorrie..
;-)
Rubal:Mein
soch raha hu..kyun na hum Bua aur Harish uncle ki firse shaadi kar waaye?
Adi:Yess…Yess..Ye
bilkul thik he..mujhe bhi to apne mom-dad ki shaadi dekhni hai.U r too good..my
Brother..
All laugh seeing child like excitement of Adi
All laugh seeing child like excitement of Adi
Kaira:Haan..lekin..ek
problem hai?
Payal:Kaunsi
Problem?
Kaira:Harish
Uncle to ek baar maan bhi jaaye lekin Bua???
Adi:When
Adi is here..Not to fear..I am the Captain of this Five Detectives team..aur
maine decide kiya hai ki Mom ko manane ka zimma hum .....
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Pankhudi ko dete hai..YEyye..Taaliya..
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Pankhudi ko dete hai..YEyye..Taaliya..
Pankhudi:Kkyaaa?
All
Claps…
Pankhudi:ahh…wait..wait..mein
aisa kuch nahi karne wali..
Adi:Pankhudi..Ye
Mr.Aditya Kumar ka hukum hai ki…
Pankhudi:Fir
to bilkul nahi karne wali..
Adi:Ahaa…ok..ok..mein
request karta hu..please..
Pankhudi:Lekin
Adi…
Kaira:Accha..ek
kaam karte hai..hum sab milkar manaate hai..
Rubal:Yaa..Correct..!!
Aditya:So..Chaliye
mere partners…Follow……..Pankhudi..
Pankhudi:Addiiii…
Adi:Ok…Meri
Maa…
All
Five goes in the Hall..
Taddaa...Time Up..Continues in the next post...
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