Sunday, 9 February 2014

Kahi..Unkahin..Baatein-Part 2

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Now here is the next part of Pal..Aur ek Faisla..which i renamed it to..Kahi..Unkahin..Baatein..Given by one of my reader and my friend..

Hope you will like it..Starting from some what recap..so that you can connect the chain of the story

All four are sitting near the Marine Drive..
Both Harish and Adi and gets up..

Adi:Dad..Chaliye na hum yaha se aage chalte hai..

Avantika:No..No..You both are not going..yaha hi bedhe raho chup-chap..

Both sits down silently..

Harish mimics Avantika:yaha hi bedhe raho chup-chap..

Avantika:Very Funny..

Harish:Kya yaar tum hum par hukum kar sakti ho…lekin tum kisiki ka bhi order nahi maan sakti..

Avantika:Kaunsa Order??

Harish:Yahi ki you will not be a donor..

Avantika:Not again Harish…

Harish:I am not fighting at all..he hold her hands..dekho please meri poori baat suno..I know tumhe Preeti ki bohut fikr hai..aur vo hum sab ko bhi hai..and we will find a donor in few days..

Adi:Aur Mom aapko BP problems hai..itni jaldi aapka pressure high ho jaata hai you can’t control your anger..

Avantika:Lekin Harish-Adi agar in kuch dino mein Preeti ko kuch ho gaya to..mein apne aap ko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paungi…

Pankhudi:Aur Dad-Adi..aaplog agar mom ki place pe hote to aap kya karte bataaiye..?

Both Harish and Adi becomes Mum…

Avantika:I need your support Harish…please maan jao..

Harish stares at her Lovingly..and says:Tumhe pata hai tum bohot ziddi ho?

Avantika nods her head like a small baby.

Harish:par..agar tumhe kuch hua na..mein apne aap ko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paunga..

Avantika:kuch nahi hoga Mujhe Harish..mere saath meri puri family hai..looking towards Adi :Hain Na??

Adi just gives up and says:Ofcourse Hai…:Pata nahi saare ziddi log mere hi naseeb mein hai!!

All Laugh together…

Pankhudi:Aapko to Adi mein…

Harish:Bass..Bass..Butterfly abhi nahi..varna fir hum dono ki bhi ladaai shuru ho jaayegi..and I don’t want my Dabbang Lady in Action at the Moment…

All Four of them..Laugh a lot..with their cute nok-jhoks…and…….

Flashback Ended…

28th Fabruary 2014 ..

Pankhudi:That was the Last day where I have seen Adi and Dad Happy…

Pankhudi ko pata hi nahi chala..aaj bhi subha kaise ho gayi…raat bhar vo bas us pal ko yaad karti rahi jisne sabki zindagi badal di..

Aur Adi..usse pata hi nahi chala kab vo hall mein hi kaam karte karte so gaya..

Pankhudi comes in the Hall..at the Moment Adi also gets up..

Pankhudi:Adi..aap ready ho jaiye..mein breakfast ready karti hu..

Adi:Hmm..aur fir hume wahan bhi jaana hai..Dad Kaha hai?

Pankhudi:Wahi hai..

Adi:Raat ko wapas nahi aaye?

Pankhudi:Nahi..

Adi:Ok..thik he..mein ready ho jaata hu..aur fir hum bhi chalte hai..

Pankhudi:Lekin Adi..Breakfast?

Adi:Mujhe bhook nahi hai..

Pankhudi:Par Adi aapne raat ko bhi thik se nahi khaaya tha..abhi to..

Adi:Meine kaha na..I don’t want to eat..can’t you understand..

Tears welled up in Pankhudi’s eyes..

Adi also realized he was Rude..ruffles his hair in disbelief

Adi:I am Sorry…and goes up in this room..

Pankhudi thinks:Adi mein jaanti hu..aapko mujhe hurt karne ka koi iraada nahi tha..mein aapko aise nahi dekh sakti…plzz MOM vapas Aajaiye..

Scene shifts to the Hospital…

Harish is sitting near the bed holding the hand of the Lady..who is sleeping on the bed.....The Kidney transfer was successful..but Due to the high blood pressure problem.. She is in Coma for a month

Harish:Maine kaha tha tumse mein apne aapko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paunga..agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to…
Plzz wapas aa jao Avantika..mujhe meri daandti hui..Ladti hui…Chillati hui..gussa karti…Avantika wapas chahiye…

Adi and Pankhudi are standing outside the room of the hospital and seeing this…

Both are feeling helpless..this One Month has been tremendously vulnerable for them..From One Month they are daily seeing this..but can’t do anything..

Both wipes their tears and enters the room…

By seeing them entering Harish also wipes his tears and behaves to be normal..

Adi:Hi..Dad..Hi..Mom…Pata hai Mom aaj bhi iske saath mera jhagda hua..koi bhi baat meri maanti hi nahi..

Pankhudi:Mom..meri galti nahi thi..Fir bhi Adi ne mujhe daanta..Aap please uthiye aur inhe khub daantiye..

Adi:Mom..Plzz Uthiye na..mein aapki daant kya..thappad khaane ko bhi taiyyar hu..

Harish,Pankhudi,Aditya..all the family members come everyday..as the doctors have said that this communication can help her to be out of Coma soon…

Preeti arrives at the hospital..She is the one who is feeling utmost guilt due to the condition of her sister…She is standing near the door..because she knows No one tell anything to her but all this has been arose because of her only..

Pankhudi:Arre..Maasi..aaiye na..dekhiye Mom..Maasi aai he..aur vo bhi aapke favourite flowers lekar..

Preeti:Hi..di..Dekhiye mein aapke favourite flowers layi hu..aur maine bilkul bhi cheating nahi ki is baar..its exact 24 flowers !

Adi:oh Wow.Maasi!Half flowers meri taraf se..

Preeti:No Adi..whole credit goes to me..

Harish gets up from her seat and tries to move out..

Preeti:Jiju..rukiye na..yahi pe..

Harish: mujhe Avantika ki reports bhi collect karni hai..I am going there..

Vo Chulbula sa Jija-Saali ka rishta bhi kahi kho gaya tha..Preeti ko lagta hai ki Harish usse naaraz hai..lekin Harish Preeti se khafa bilkul nahi the..vo to apne aapse naaraz the…

He was going out of the room when Doctors enters in the room:

Doctor:Hello..So Whole Kumar Family is here..That’s Great..

Adi:Hello..Doctor..aaj Mom ki reports aane vali thi na..?

Doctor:Oh..Yaa..Mr.Kumar and there is a good news..Mrs.Kumar is out of Coma…

The moment Doctor speaks..all their happiness knew no bounds…They are the happiest people in the world right know...

Harish:Lekin Doctor..Avantika to abhi bhi…

Doctor:Yes..Mr.Kumar..vo coma se bahar aa chuki hai..lekin unhe hosh aane mein thoda waqt lagega..jaise hi injections ka asar jaayega…She will be Back..

Harish:Thank you ..Thank you so much Doctor…

Adi:Thank you so much…

Both Adi and Harish Hugs each other tightly which was very much needed

Pankhudi and Preeti also hugs each other tight as much as they can..

All have tears in their eyes..but this are of happiness…

Preeti sees Harish with teary eyes and tells:Congatulations Jiju..Di waapas aa rahi hai…

Both of them Forgetting everything Hug each other..

Harsih:Haan..Hamari Dabang Lady waapas aarahi hai…

All laugh with immense Happiness…

Adi:Dad..aap sab log ghar jaaiye..mein yaha rukta hu…

Pankhudi:Nahi Adi..Aap sab jaaiye..mein Mom ke paas rukti hu..

Preeti:No Adi-Pankhu..mein yaha rukti hu..

Harish:Bass…ho gaya sabka..Mein yaha ruk raha hu..kyunki mein chahta hu ki jaise hi Avantika aankhe khole sabse pehle vo mujhe dekhe..

Adi:Wohhooo..Dad!Romantic-Shumatic Dad mere aa gaye…

Harish:Ab meri Hitler Queen wapas aa rahi hai to Comedian-King Harish ko to wapas aana hi tha..!

Adi: I miss U Dad…!

Both had a Fatherly hug…

Adi:Lekin..Lekin..mein yahi rahunga..jab tak mom ko hosh nahi aata..

Pankhudi:Mein bhi..

Preeti:Mein bhi…

Harish:Thik he aap sab bahar bhed sakte ho..

Adi:Ok..Dad!

Few Hours spent waiting and waiting…

In the Evening :

Harish was sitting with eyes closed…but a sudden moment on his hand..make him to open his eyes..And here He sees what he was longing to see..Her Lady Love is holding her hand having a perfect smile on her face..which he misses a lot…

Harish:Avantikaa..Heaving a sigh of relief..he hold his hand as tightly as he can…and kisses her hand…

Avantika:Harish…

Harish:Aaha..Abhi kuch nahi..chup…Pehle thik ho jao..fir jitna bolna hai..utna bolna..daantna...ladna gusaa karna...I "ll call Adi..Addiii

Adi comes running inside the room followed by Pankhudi and Preeti Maasi..

Adi:Mom..!Adi had tears in his eyes..that was stopped from a month…which started flowing..

He comes and Hugs her mom and cry like a small Baby…

Avantika:Adi..Darling..Don’t cry..

Adi:Promise me mom..you will never leave me again like this..

Avantika just nods her head…

Adi gets up wiping his tears and says:Now no more sadness..

Preeti comes and sit near the bed:Di..I am So Sorry..meri wajese..ye sab..

Avantika:Preeti..Ye mera faisla tha..aur mujhe iska bilkul bhi afsos nahi hai..

Avantika and Both Preeti hugs..

Adi:Bas..Massi..Mom..Now no more tears..

Pankhudi:Yes..Adi..Ab aap jaldi se thik ho jaaiye Mom..aur fir hum milkar aapki aur Dad ki Anniversary celebrate karenge..bilkul pehle ki tarha

And at the moment Kaira,Rubal,Payal,Sheela Mami,Anuj Mama,Sameer enters the room and says:Aur Hum Bhi…

Everone Meet Avantika whole heartedly and wishes her to Get Well Soon..

Days Passed By..Avantika is recovering speedily by a medicine in a form of full of  immense love she is getting from her family….

She is back Home in Deewan Mansion..All are taking care of her with utmost sincerity..infact Sheela Mami too misses her Nanad a lot while she was in Coma..She too cares about her..

Now Avantika is Completely Fit and Fine and Back to Normal Life…

All the Family Members are sitting in the Hall Having an some Light Food with Tea..

Pankhudi is in Kitchen..Adi comes there by making some excuse to others..
Adi comes..

Pankhudi:Adi..kuch chahiye tha aapko..

Adi:Hmm….

Pankhudi:Kya?

Adi:Maafi..

Pankhudi:Lekin aapne kya galti ki?

Adi:Pankhudi is ek mahine mein maine tujhse thikse baat tak nahi ki..I am really sorry…

Pankhudi faces Adi and putting her hand on his cheek she says:Adi..aapko mujhse maafi maangne ki koi jarurat nahi..mein jaanti hu vo waqt humaari zindagi ka sabse mushkil waqt tha..mein aapse naaraz thi lekin isliye nahi ki aap mujhse thik se baat nahi kar rahe the..balki isliye kyunki aap apna dard mujhse nahi baant rahe the..

Adi:I Love You..

Pankhudi:I Love you too

Both had a Brief Hug…

At that moment Rubal,Kaira and Payal comes and says Loudly:I Love You Three,Four..Five..Sixx…

Adi whispers:Aa gaye Haddis…

Kaira:Kya Kaha..Adi?

Adi:Ahha..Kuch Nahi..

Rubal:Oh..Mere Bhai jyaada ban mat..hum tujhe haddi lagte hai?

Adi:Aur Nahi to kya?Jab dekho tab aa jaate ho..

Kaira:Haan to ye tera badroom nahi hai ki jaha chahe tu romantic ho jaye..

Pankhudi was all the while blushing..

Payal:Bass..Bass…Bohot ho gaya..hum jo yaha planning karne aaye hai vo kare..

Adi:Kaisi Planning?

Pankhudi:Adi..sab bhul jaate hai aap..Mom aur Dad ki Anniversary aa rahi hai..to ye sab ke baad ek bada sa celebration hona chahiye na..

Adi:Oh..Haan..Sorrie.. ;-)

Rubal:Mein soch raha hu..kyun na hum Bua aur Harish uncle ki firse shaadi kar waaye?

Adi:Yess…Yess..Ye bilkul thik he..mujhe bhi to apne mom-dad ki shaadi dekhni hai.U r too good..my Brother..

All laugh seeing child like excitement of Adi

Kaira:Haan..lekin..ek problem hai?

Payal:Kaunsi Problem?

Kaira:Harish Uncle to ek baar maan bhi jaaye lekin Bua???

Adi:When Adi is here..Not to fear..I am the Captain of this Five Detectives team..aur maine decide kiya hai ki Mom ko manane ka zimma hum .....
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Pankhudi ko dete hai..YEyye..Taaliya..

Pankhudi:Kkyaaa?

All Claps…

Pankhudi:ahh…wait..wait..mein aisa kuch nahi karne wali..

Adi:Pankhudi..Ye Mr.Aditya Kumar ka hukum hai ki…

Pankhudi:Fir to bilkul nahi karne wali..

Adi:Ahaa…ok..ok..mein request karta hu..please..

Pankhudi:Lekin Adi…

Kaira:Accha..ek kaam karte hai..hum sab milkar manaate hai..

Rubal:Yaa..Correct..!!

Aditya:So..Chaliye mere partners…Follow……..Pankhudi..

Pankhudi:Addiiii…

Adi:Ok…Meri Maa…

All Five goes in the Hall..

Taddaa...Time Up..Continues in the next post...

Tab tak ke liye you can give ur suggestions for the next post..How you want this Five to make Avantika agree for Marriage? How you want Wedding to be Done? and Many many more...

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